"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals
It might seem logical, at first glance to agree with the argument about the mopeds accident during summer and remedies to overcome it. However, To fully evaluate this argument, we need a significant amount of additional evidence, the argument could end up much weaker than it seems, or it might be quite valid. To make that determination, we need to know more than analyze what we learn.
The first piece of evidence provided by author of Seaville town seems superficial as without apropos justification to evidence regarding the survey, directly implementing same rule leads to improper result which certainly engender to detrimental effects, writer in these cases directly linking the conditions of Seaville town with the Balmer without providing warranted evidence, just by predicting the same result in Balmer without understanding the crowd nature, infrastructure and other factors like training programs and facilities available.
Secondly author making an assertion that reduction in number of mopeds reduces the number of accident but unable to justify it relevance with the topic, and just by reducing the number of rental mopeds if accident will significantly reduce then what other option of transportation will government provide to tourist as without providing the other option the pedestrian crowd will increase and eventually clog the road secondly if government fail to provide other option due to will facilities and discomfort tourist will avoid Balmer and government may face serious economic loss.
So just by considering the fact of Seaville of cutting rental vehicles and same applying to Balmer Island sense like shooting an arrow in dark room, so with a proper understanding of people nature, traffic rules, infrastructure facilities, training programs and eligibility criteria of renting a moped. Assertion by the author can't take an affirming place.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1562 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.368 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.849 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.751 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.635 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mopeds'' or 'moped's'?
Suggestion: mopeds'; moped's
...ce to agree with the argument about the mopeds accident during summer and remedies to ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cation to evidence regarding the survey, directly implementing same rule leads to...
^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...enting a moped. Assertion by the author cant take an affirming place. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he author cant take an affirming place.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 19.6327345309 5% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 291.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47766323024 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88828293154 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.8473053892 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.139777867 57.8364921388 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.714285714 119.503703932 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5714285714 23.324526521 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.70786347227 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149214547619 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527311583981 0.0743258471296 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516453913991 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753767122291 0.128457276422 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323525892195 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 14.3799401198 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 48.3550499002 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.5979740519 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32208582834 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.1389221557 165% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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