The city of Winston has two large department stores: Namen and Roscoe. Namen is known for its high-end designer fashions, while Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options. Both Namen and Roscoe are each considering opening another store in the growing suburb of Salem, where the population has grown over 50% in the last three years and where the median income is $75,000. Namen’s executives argue that as population and median income increase, people are willing to spend more money on clothing. However, Roscoe’s executives believe that the suburbs are more family oriented, and therefore their store will be more profitable than their competitor Namen.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
According to the argument, both department stores, Namen and Roscoe, believe they will be more profitable in the growing suburb of Salem. Namen believes it would be more successful based on the growing population and median salary of the suburb. However, Roscoe believes that the suburbs are more family oriented and thus they would be more profitable than Namen. The arguments posed by both the stores can only be vaildated if answers to the following questions are provided.
Firstly, on what basis do the shops believe that people living in the suburb of Salem would want to spend their money on new clothes. It might be possible that people in the suburb despite a blossoming income have no interest in buying fashionable clothes at all. The people might be miselry and not want to spend their had earned money on fashionable clothing and would save the money for future use in case of an emergency. If any of the above is true, the arguments given by both the stores falls flat.
Secondly, Namen stores needs to ossify the basis on which they believe that the median salary of the population will keep growing. It is highly possible that a new IT company just opened up in the nearby area and many people previously jobless have now been recruited by the company for well paying jobs. If the IT comapny has filled out all vaccancies, an increase in the median salary of the suburb is not a given. If the above is true, the argument put forth by Namen stands significantly weakened.
Another question which needs to answered is the reliability of the source which states the median income of the suburb in Salem. It might be possible that the survey which was taken to record the incomes of various individuals was biased and only a small fraction of the people were actually surveyed. Another significant factor is the difference between the median income and the mean income of the people in the suburb. It is possible that the median income might be high, but the mean income, which determines the spread of income over the popluation of the suburb, be very low; thus indicating that not all member of the suburbs are in a state to spend on fashionable clothing.
In conclusion, the arguments posed by the two stores as it stands now is severly flawed, due to the dependance on several unwarranted assumptions. In order to truly evaluate the validity and effectiveness of the arguments, the above questions need to be answered in a systematic and reliable manner.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ng. It is highly possible that a new IT company just opened up in the nearby area and m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...by the company for well paying jobs. If the IT comapny has filled out all vaccancies, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 429.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54759466716 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452214452214 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1428611658 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15388040346 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540284902198 0.0743258471296 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441802467638 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860104453704 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531272446313 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ng. It is highly possible that a new IT company just opened up in the nearby area and m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...by the company for well paying jobs. If the IT comapny has filled out all vaccancies, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 429.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54759466716 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452214452214 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1428611658 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15388040346 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540284902198 0.0743258471296 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441802467638 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860104453704 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531272446313 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.