Essay topics:
The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
immigrants pose a threat to the country and must be returned to their origin country. The argument based on the unwarranted assumption and flawed for the following reasons.
First of all, the author claimed that countries autonomy depends on its borders, but the autonomy of countries also depends on its policies, economic growth, and other human rights. many countries do not have a strong defense line but considered as a developed country. Actually, it's the opposite, the countries spent more on defense overlooked the human rights, spent less on quality of life of its denizen.
The author also claimed that illegal immigrant poses a threat towards national security and national identity are endangered. The assumption of the author is flawed because if illegal immigrant poses a threat and endangered security then the United States would be the most dangerous country and security would be compromised. There are thousands of immigrants went to the United States for a better life. Immigrants may have low-quality lifestyles but they contribute to the country and make a country more diverse and helped directly or indirectly towards bolstering the economy.
The author also claimed that illegal immigrant should be returned to the origin country as they pose a threat. Does the author provide a survey where he can properly claim that a country is safe without immigration? Then why does middle east counties are so restless, they do not have immigrants. Without immigration, every country struggled for human power and countries with higher economic growth has higher immigration rates.
The argument is flawed and based on unfeasible reasons and haphazard assumptions. The author failed to provide any relevant data that convince readers that illegal immigrants pose a threat.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 283 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1478 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.223 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.635 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.436 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.366 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Immigrants
immigrants pose a threat to the country and must b...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... First of all, the author claimed that countries autonomy depends on its borders, but th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...conomic growth, and other human rights. many countries do not have a strong defense ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...dered as a developed country. Actually, its the opposite, the countries spent more ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 283.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33922261484 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72397140725 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494699646643 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6910268093 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270374707067 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953961357297 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474651121524 0.0701772020484 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155109322673 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352348738255 0.0628817314937 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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