All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and
supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to
challenge your position.
Does parents' participation to their children's school always bring better outcomes? Some people may agree with such question, suggesting the positive aspects of parents' involvement. However, this essay will contend that requiring parents' to volunteer for their children's education does not always guarantee good results.
Granted, parents' volunteering to school life may provide a chance for their children's development in both intellectual and emotional sense. This seems true that children can feel comfortable and open to the education environment when their parents are with them. With more open hearts, children's learning ability would get enhanced and more likely to participate in challengeable tasks compared to the vacancy of their parents.
However, there are several things that we should keep in our mind before we take it for granted: first, parents' volunteering to school also have negative influence as well; second, some students may get isolated from such program.
First, obsessive participation may hinder the education of their children. For example, one of social issues related to education, the helicoper-mom, has been regarded as the example of obssesive participation in education environment. When parents are deeply involved in every aspect of their children's education, not only teachers lost their autonomy as an educator, but also children's dependency on parents gets worse.
Moreover, such education program cannot be realized in some families. Except for the mid-income family and so-called normal family, it is almost impossible for students to participate with their parents who are either single-parents, both working parents, parents with disability or language deficiencies. When children are forced to bring their parents regardless of their family conditions, they would get emotionally hurt and feel isolated from their school.
In sum, for some education sectors may get positively influenced by the parents' participation, but we should consider the conditions of students' families and be aware of the adverse influence from obsessive parenting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 11, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...rs may get positively influenced by the parents participation, but we should consider t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, except for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77741935484 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94653891393 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7074463731 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176183287491 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748632531985 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294011959388 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101960360028 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368178252005 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.