All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Here statement contends that all parents should spend some time on their child in their schools. Participation of the parent makes the student more comfortable and happy and also encourage them to perform the particular task more confidently. Parent's spending time with the student is the volunteering time. So, I completely agree with the author's contention.
The chief reason why I agree with the statement is that if parents don't spend time with their offsprings makes them unconnected gradually and they feels uncomfortable while sharing their daily experiences with their parents. Nowadays, in the twenty-first century, both parents are pursuing jobs. So they can not spend much time with their children. This makes them unaware of their successors' problems and difficulties. Volunteering is the way through which parents can keep eye on their child.
Moreover, spending volunteering time, the parent gets connected with teachers and they can get the report of their child's progress and their abilities. Also, they become aware of their child's weakness and can take the required decisions for the advancement of their child. By spending volunteer time, offsprings also get connected with their parents. They feel safe and secured. They can share their problems with the view that their parents can help them. It is the responsibility of the parents to listen to their children.
Sometimes, many schools make parents' involvement in school compulsory. They arrange monthly meetings between teachers and parents. This is also an appreciative step. But making parent involvement compulsory is not a fair enough. sometimes, due to any reason, parents cannot spend the necessary time in school. In that condition, schools take reactionary steps and the students have to face them. I think that this is not a valid solution. Because there can be any serious reason behind the uninvolvement of the parents. For example, suppose the student has sick grandparents in the family. So, it is the primary requirement to take care of them rather than volunteering time in the school. So the schools also have to see the reason behind uninvolvement.
In the final analysis, according to me, it is important for the parents to spend volunteering time in their child's school and also the schools should not make it compulsory for all the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...kes them unconnected gradually and they feels uncomfortable while sharing their daily...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...h parents can keep eye on their child. Moreover, spending volunteering time, th...
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... Sometimes, many schools make parents involvement in school compulsory. They a...
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...vement compulsory is not a fair enough. sometimes, due to any reason, parents cannot spen...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hink that this is not a valid solution. Because there can be any serious reason behind ...
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Suggestion:
... it compulsory for all the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.296 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82253030689 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461333333333 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8587479789 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5555555556 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365816023455 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106746625515 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103696127633 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238271084679 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679221904652 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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