Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Leaders are the person who set up their own beliefs and paths towards the betterment of people. Author’s claim “Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by the shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little” is little contentious claim as in certain situation where the beliefs and opinion held by others are more convincing then the held by leader, then leader should be compliant enough to accept the opinions of others, whereas, Leader are considered as role model for people and they try to imitate their lives, if leader wavering behavior then people will not consider them as their role model.
Consider a situation, In India, Mahatma Gandhi is able to achieve such name and fame because he have never eluded non-violence path. Even though he can live sumptuous life,he followed the path of austerity. He had spent his whole life in making India’s people life better. If he had obviated the non-violence path and followed the violence path, as at that time India’s people were enraged towards british rule and want independence even though it costs their life. Did his able to win such name from people? Mahatma Gandhi had become example for people because eventhough he followed non-violence path, he succeeded in making india free from british rule. Thus, Leader should be those who remain ardent in following their own beliefs. Leader greatness leaves in his/her decision making, if he/she get easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion, then he/she might get muddled up in opinions and may not able to come up with a solution.
The popular opinions are the opinions of the loudest groups, which might not turn out to be good for people in general. Thus, Leader easily getting influenced by the popular opinion might fail to make good decision in interest of all. Consider a situation, increasing the price of foods and groceries just because there is increase in profits made by rich people, will it consider as viable for people whose life condition is still the same? Thus, Leader should make decision in favor of all not just the major groups.There are many secret operations that are carried out by leaders that people don’t have any hint of it. Thus, in such situation relying on people’s opinion might not be considered as fruitful.
However, Leader should not be to stringent in carrying out their beliefs or opinions that he/she overlook the benefits of the opinion of other people. Each and every person is peculiar and they have different perspective in viewing things. Thus, Considering opinions of people might help leader in coming up with better idea. Though, leader before getting influenced by the opinions of people, should closely consider the consequences of such opinions.
On wrapping up, Leader considering people’s opinion might provide him/her a different perspective at looking things but he/she should closely circumspect the consequences of such beliefs or opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...nion held by others are more convincing then the held by leader, then leader should ...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...o achieve such name and fame because he have never eluded non-violence path. Even th...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
.... Even though he can live sumptuous life,he followed the path of austerity. He had ...
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Line 3, column 809, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...s in his/her decision making, if he/she get easily influenced by shifts in popular ...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der a situation, increasing the price of foods and groceries just because there i...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... favor of all not just the major groups.There are many secret operations that are car...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'overlooks'.
Suggestion: overlooks
...t their beliefs or opinions that he/she overlook the benefits of the opinion of other pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, thus, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18541666667 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64177099557 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.233776742 60.3974514979 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.45 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275490946289 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842422779405 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934852581993 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170969668996 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105141314382 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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