The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Feedback is a very important tool through which people in leadership positions can assess the impact of their decisions. Feedback gives essential information about the repercussions of the decisions taken. The author of the prompt states that the best industry leaders encourage feedback for their actions, which I completely agree with. The reasons for the agreement are stated in the following paragraphs.
When the current Indian Prime Minister Narendra Modi came to power in 2014, he launched many schemes and campaigns for the benefit of the people like 'Make in India' campaign, 'Swachh Bharat Abhiyan' initiative etcetera. To better understand the repercussions of his decisions he launched an online portal through which people may submit their queries or misgivings. After collecting data about the various campaigns started, he modified his approach to solving problems and optimized the process of governing. Thus he used the feedback to better his decision making and solve problems efficiently.
Ratan Tata is an Indian industrialist who headed the billion-dollar Tata group. He uses feedback to optimise his decision making and to produce results more efficiently. When he was in talks to buy Jaguar-Land Rover from Ford, he took the feedback of his employes and understood how to best create a synergy to keep both the companies profitable. Thus, he used feedback of his employees to better the existing conditions.
Jeff Bezos, CEO of Amazon has created a portal which he calls the feedback loop which he uses effectively to better understand the impact of his decisions. He also makes giving feedback anonymous so that anyone can give feedback be it a high-level executive, a low tier analyst or an angry customer. Jeff critically analyses every feedback and tries to learn from it.
Thus industry leaders who want to take their respective companies to new heights must take feedback to their employees and customers and use it to deliver better results. One of the qualities of best industry leaders is that they always appreciate feedback irrespective of the source and try to make better decisions in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28362573099 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81880596048 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2244484196 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35294117647 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202461755932 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696709134558 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519214800406 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122922889203 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499931934432 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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