The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.

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The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.

The plight of the nation is best understood by the people living there, with only their leader as the liberator. Nation's prosperity, on the other hand, is also experienced by the populace, with no one to thank but the leader himself. The head is seen as the Messiah for the people and it is his responsibility to cherish the lives of everyone present under him.
Leading the state to enrichment can be nearly impossible without the suggestion and feedback from the people, who under his rule, are thriving or dying, depending on the dictum of the state. It is the leader's utmost duty to know the condition in which his people are and whether they are happy with his rule or not.
For instance, if the leader, after gaining his position as the Head does nothing but live his life to the fullest, neglecting the court duties, being evasive to the pleas and cries of the people, is nothing but a hoodwinker. He is not fit to have the last word for the state.
However, if he sees to the feedback from his people and works over them, he has a chance of winning over the hearts of the people and even getting himself the chance to be the leader again. Acting on it would be in favor for both the parties and will help both flourish.
To know if the people are happy under his rule, the leader has to hear it from them, and for that, quarterly meeting of the head with the men is an essential task and should be done for the progress of the country.
It is understandable now that the feedback from the people the leader is leading is very crucial and should be encouraged not muted. The Right to Speech will show the leader where he is going wrong or right with his duty.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e lives of everyone present under him. Leading the state to enrichment can be n...
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... parties and will help both flourish. To know if the people are happy under hi...
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... done for the progress of the country. It is understandable now that the feedba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as to, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37620578778 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29509927713 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7849410344 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258985731614 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980970423322 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915276840389 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136666454835 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070881707402 0.0667264976115 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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