The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership that is great, demands of the leader the quality of cooperation. But is becoming a leader possible without having a competitive spirit? In the fast-moving world, may it be any field; government, industry, or any other field; to become a leader, you must not only own the knowledge or ability, but also should have leadership qualities.
Some of the qualities a leader should have include integrity, cooperation, ability, knowledge of the specified field. The person should also know how to deal with kinds of people, should be able to take unwavering decisions. The leader should be able to take the responsibility, and not run away from them, even during the bad times. These qualities, if we are able to instill in children, right from their childhood would definitely create great leaders.
It is not just cooperation which make the leader great, we should guide the young generation to be keen towards new knowledge, learn new things, as a leader must be up to date with the latest trends and technologies coming up in their particular field. Though possessing all these characteristics, the person should have a fighting spirit, or have a competitive spirit, as just the behavior is not responsible for leadership.
And competition does not necessarily mean competing in a bad and deceptive way, we should incline the young generation towards "healthy" competition, a fair competition. And if there is fair and healthy competition between people, firms, or even nations, it necessarily does not harm or hinder anyone's growth. It definitely helps one to grow, and get the best out of them. For example, competing for the Cricket World Cup, all nations compete, but for the cause of winning things, and not to put somebody down.
Finally, on the concluding note, I would like to say, we should undoubtedly instill in our young generation, the sense of cooperation, but also we should instill in them a sense of healthy competition, as it is one of the major factors and characteristic that a leader should have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'some'.
...so should have leadership qualities. Some of the qualities a leader should have include ...
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Use past participle here: 'included'.
...e of the qualities a leader should have include integrity, cooperation, ability, knowl...
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...uld have include integrity, cooperation, ability, knowledge of the specified fiel...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07715133531 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05134268451 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513353115727 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4971074385 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207023205628 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068746920089 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531249325615 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115788798195 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047190414485 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.