Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
leadership is a art of motivating a group of people to achive a common goal. it also includes taking critical decision and negociason also.The speaker claim that in any field like business, politics, government , after 5 years power should step down.In this case as a reson he states new leadership is the surest path of success. In few respect his assertion is right. In most respect , however , I think the surest path of success is a extream word in this case.
experience manager has less possibility to repetation of erronous task. For my supportive example , say one manager in any electrical lab has definitely less possibility to make an serious accident with respect to newer one. In business deal previous experience is pivotal. say google and facebook –two famous tech company –always hold there sucessful manager for long term.
In long term political deal ,it is essential of experience leader. For example , Iran nuclear deal, it is lasting more than 12 years. The writer claim 5 years is enough. But in long term and sustainable development it is not enough withn 5 years. In Sewden , most of banking sector managers work untill there retirement.
In prodigious or complex system , it is defficult to a new manager to be a succesful leader within 5 years. Reason behind this , in large system some project are chain system. Future project is depends on pressent running project. Present runing project is definitely depands on past. so in chain system organization it tough to achive a goal with a new leader in short term.
In small organization, changing manager within 5 years is may be a right decision. Sometimes young managers are more innovative and expert in using technology.changing manager also create a new flavour of working environment.
In sum, In some respect changing leader within 5 years may be fruitful, however in most case to achive a long lerm goal it is not effective. so I fundamentally disagree with the claim of writer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, for example, i think, in short, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86696028864 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.682598139 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0909090909 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194761072417 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428443038373 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790834418912 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855768134849 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106123411293 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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