Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated

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Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated

culture is a valuable asset of any nation. The nation who are rich in their culture , they are also rich in any aspect. In this prompt , the speaker claim that government should ensure financial support in their major cities for preserving their cultural traditions. In some respect, the claim of author may be right. however, in most case , I believe rural or village area also important for preserving cultural traditions.I stand my position for the reasons.

Firstly , for cultural variation, In most case village has a huge range with respect to cities. For example , Dhaka,the capital city of Bangladesh, it has some different culture but not greater than the number of culture in country sides.people in this cities always busy with their modern life. In the entertainment source of the people in this cities is confined internet, music and sports only.On the other site in village numerous number of entertainment source such as Ballad, drama, regional song, different type of traditional fool and so on. That’s why in my opinion country area is an important part for preserving cultural tradition.

In economical perspective , in city area ,cultural programme,s cost is relatively high and the audience is relatively low. most important site is booked for educational institute, hospital and office also. On the other hand there is available open site for cultural programme. village people has high interest on culture compared to city dweller.

Major cities of a country is more vulnerable in war and battle. so ancient architecture are easy preserved in small town or countryside. For example in Athens most of the tample is are in stage of rouin.but country sides structure are less damage due to war.

modern citizens are more susceptable to internet. they like fast food on the other site in village , they has numerous type of traditional foods and festival also.

Beside those example, some city has importance for their culture. such as Paris in French, or london in England. but this type of ancient cities are exceptional.

In sum, in few perspective , city area has importance for preserving cultural tradition . however in most respect I think government should make sure financial support to save cultural tradition in village area.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, with respect to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21643835616 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79692947584 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5304938909 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7826086957 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285300884082 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089872755387 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849293899977 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147897280277 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777866066368 0.0667264976115 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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