Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Urban and rural structures are two consequential components of a society. They have complementary effect and their support and collaboration in different aspects of economy and culture strengthens and fortifies the whole society when facing vicissitudes and adversities. Both of them should be considered in policies and decision makings. Ignoring each of them or sacrificing one for the sake of other would result in prejudicial and detrimental consequences for the whole.
The role and importance of cities although critical and consequential, can be of more or less significance in different societies around the globe. Some countries are rural based with few cities, such as Bhutan or Mongolia while you can trace some other countries on the map that are merely urban base reminding city-states of the past, such as Singapore or Hong Kong. And others which find a status somewhere in between. In all these societies, cities especially the extensive metropolitan types and even unimportant looking small towns interspersed throughout the country have their significant role encompassing different aspects of economy, education and culture.
Cities as well as any other society vacillates through rise and falls of prosperity and advancement, might have periods of rise or decline due to management issues of the city itself or politic and economic matters of the country. Sometimes calamities and disasters such earthquake or storm hit the city. Such as the great earthquake which hit Kathmandu, Nepal few years age and inflicted a great harm to the magnificent historical site in the center of the city. No matter why, the survival and continuance of cities and their cultural accommodation to the country is of paramount importance.
On the other hand, city's failure or bankruptcy would lead to deleterious upshots. Cities are the center of education. Most great schools and universities are gathered in cities. Cities are where great decision making in policy and economy is done. Cities are were the heritage and history of the nation is materialized in form of architecture, libraries and museums. Decline of the city, has its negative and detrimental effect on the whole society. Conservation and of this heritage is expensive. You have to spent money to take care of it. Keeping the architecture with periodic repair and renovation costs money. Museums need investments to survive and to accommodate to the needs and anticipations of the generation. Libraries have to keep updated with new arrivals. Some of these recompense partly with their own kinds of income. Museums and repositories can sell tickets, libraries and halls can hold conventions and conferences. Some of these benefit from donations and contribution. City councils acknowledge their significance and value in their policy makings and budget planning. But the cultural value of these heritages are of such importance that they need a supervising look to oversee the process of management and make sure that they are functioning well without great impediments.
Although cultural identity as well as economic activities and social interaction have their root both in the cities especially big cities and outside in rural and suburban communities, cities have a major role in flourishing and preserving cultural legacy. They have to be supported and sustained in any condition for generations to come. Their failure or loss can be irrecoverable to society and governments have to make sure that their doing well at any possible condition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, more or less, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 52.0 14.8657303371 350% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2984.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 553.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39602169982 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04497278024 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.0906453553 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2580645161 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8387096774 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35483870968 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215478923378 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501953860587 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559051966834 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11960377213 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561140496729 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 100.480337079 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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