Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Major cities represents a country and has to be maintained well as so many visitors from outside country visit these cities and get first impression about country. This can be the reason that governments must ensure that major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive. But claim is based on a reason that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated in the major cities, which is not much appealing to provide funding to major cities. The cultural traditions are generally generated in rural areas of the country, not in big cities.
First, Major cities generally present the fusion of cultural traditions from different areas of the country. People migrate to big cities from rural areas to find work or to live better life. People from different areas interact with each other and try to follow each other's traditions. Mostly they follow whatever they like about a tradition, which eradicates originality of customs. For example, Diwali is a famous festival of India and it is celebrated in whole country but in different ways. Mostly in cities, it is one day festival, but some of the rural areas or small cities will be celebrating for five days, there will be ceremonies for all five days.
Another reason is that people in big cities are busy, they don't have time follow all the cultural traditions in a traditional way. There can be some festivals or traditions that are limited to a particular area, not well known in whole country and government doesn't declare national holiday for those. Then people who are living in big cities want to celebrate those festivals, they can do whenever they get time, probably on weekend, or they do celebrate but for custom sake only, not in proper way. Thus they fail to preserve the traditions.
Finally, major cities of a country are mostly influenced by cultures of other countries. Particularly developing countries big cities are influenced by developed countries culture, then it becomes mixed culture and can't give a true impression of actual cultural traditions. For example, Delhi is major city in India, most of the people especially youngsters try to follow western culture. It reflects in their style of living, dressing, or eating. Somebody who is not from India might get feeling that thats Indian culture is like this.
Thus, in conclusion, claim presented that government should ensure major cities receive enough funding to thrive because there nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated is not agreeable. Above discussion and examples explain very will that tradition doesn't generate there, they carried over from other parts of country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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...hat people in big cities are busy, they dont have time follow all the cultural tradi...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...time follow all the cultural traditions in a traditional way. There can be some festivals or traditi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244258872651 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.175365344468 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104384133612 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542797494781 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0292275574113 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118997912317 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0396659707724 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58370351381 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027139874739 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668058455115 0.0997080785238 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0187891440501 0.0249443105267 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167014613779 0.0148568991511 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2664.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 435.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12413793103 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388505747126 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280459770115 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131034482759 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58370351381 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47816091954 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.0059952017 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7142857143 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3978610749 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.7602627258 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.5564516129 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506436399046 0.391690518653 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145563618722 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124934667098 0.077325440228 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500405289216 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123920237228 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187520609436 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141393607732 0.0892212321368 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277148426844 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0896179027962 0.0692045440612 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332355614295 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135776560249 0.0653680567796 208% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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