Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Laws and legal systems are made to maintain the discipline, increase the security of the society. Whereas author claims that problems of the society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. And the reason behind this is laws cannot change what is in people’s heart or mind. At some constraint the claim by the author is not true.
Firstly, laws and legal systems have to follow certain prototypes and they have some limitations. They cannot directly change people’s minds or hearts but they can set examples for the society. For example, by giving the punishment to the person or group who has done some criminal activity or part of crime they can change ones mind. So, before thinking about any criminal activity one will think twice about consequences of that crime on his/her own future.
Secondly, every time we cannot blame laws and legal system for not solving the problems of modern society. Its also individuals responsibility to maintain the discipline of the society. For example, police cannot arrest the person on the basis of doubt there should be a strong physical evidence before arresting any person. Also its individuals responsibility to cooperate with the legal system and follow all the laws.
In conclusion, laws and authorities are made for the people of the society and to solve their problems. Whereas , law and legal systems also have certain limitations due to which they are not able to fulfill the peoples needs or not able to solve the problem of society. We cannot conclude Laws can completely change what is in peoples mind and hearts but it may help people to change there heart and mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So , before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...art of crime they can change ones mind. So, before thinking about any criminal activity on...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...econdly, every time we cannot blame laws and legal system for not solving the pro...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...solving the problems of modern society. Its also individuals responsibility to main...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...l evidence before arresting any person. Also its individuals responsibility to coope...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ety and to solve their problems. Whereas , law and legal systems also have certain...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270700636943 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.130573248408 0.157235817809 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0668789808917 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0605095541401 0.0497285424764 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0350318471338 0.0444667217837 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0955414012739 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0254777070064 0.0406280797675 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55855296236 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031847133758 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101910828025 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0382165605096 0.0249443105267 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127388535032 0.0148568991511 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1651.0 2732.02544248 60% => OK
No of words: 278.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93884892086 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352517985612 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226618705036 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161870503597 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0755395683453 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55855296236 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 219.290929204 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485611510791 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 46.6005904605 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5333333333 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3677831685 59.4972553346 46% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.674092028746 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 41.1952038369 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.7323943662 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.521500683802 0.391690518653 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131093568908 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0752852577236 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578404481158 0.547984918172 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0961129938447 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221019886333 0.161403998019 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129486816324 0.0892212321368 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319824317518 0.385218514788 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0469168379259 0.0692045440612 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362711529386 0.275328986314 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123820501912 0.0653680567796 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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