Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim
and the reason on which that claim is based.
Law and legal system are there to ensure the integrity of the society and proper working of the
overall economy but it cannot be assured that it always represent the whole society. Hence, I
support the claim that there might be the possibility that what people think, cannot be governed
by law and legal systems.
Today's law and legal system have imposed restrictions that are not valid for everyone as some
might feel, for example, usage of the drugs as totally fine until they are used under controlled
ways rather than restricting it. As in some states of US, after the legalization of the drug usage,
the number of cases of drug abuse went down. This proves a general human tendency to be
curious about the things about they are restricted from and hence imposing fewer restrictions
will give better outcomes.
If law and legal systems put harsh restrictions over the society, people may go rogue as the
people follow their passions and if it is forbidden to do so, there will be distress. For example,
the voting rights given only to male in most of the middle east countries create a negative
environment treating women as weaker. Such an act or law restricting the basic needs or rights
of the people make the economy weak and hence they tend to break the laws and perform what
they feel is right following their heart and mind.
Finally, the legal system depends and works on the basis of what it sees and what evidence is
provided even though the reality is another way around. This makes people less reliable and
even make them less confident in belief in such a system for their needs and queries. Cases or
the new requests for the new rules or amendments in the current rules by the society takes
many years to be passed till when the significance of it goes down. Hence, people don't want to
wait longer for their needs and work without confirming it to the law and legal systems even if it
not valid.
Another negative impact of such a system is that it reduced the flexibility of the society to better
and improved thinking as when the government or the legal system is not supportive. If ideas by
young generation which are tested and can help the society to be improved cannot be
supported, then people will work according to what they feel is correct without following the law
and system.
The law and system need to be more flexible and listen to the people as it is there for them. The
system should be more open to the society and take inputs from them, working and trying to
understand the needs and benefits before any strict actions. Hence, if the above is not followed,
the people will always follow their hear and minds even though not correct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 24, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ificance of it goes down. Hence, people dont want to wait longer for their needs an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, may, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73012552301 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28639266722 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47280334728 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6135544353 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.0 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.97078651685 604% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248520081406 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924027181637 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071205560429 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710408004435 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05933371408 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.