Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Laws are the rules and regulations imposed on a group of people by the administration in order to maintain a hustle free and streamlined society. Undoubtably enforcing law and order helps the society by ensuring no injustice will be tolerated. Any wrongdoing will have severe implications and thus creates a fear in an individual and acts as a deterrent for many crimes. But are all problems solved by the legal system? It is definitely one of the major forces which keeps individually working bodies under check but it has its own limitations which are elucidated below.
Starting with the fact that ultimately laws are enforced on an individual, which means tat sometimes the strict actions cause fear in the person but does not change his predilection towards the negative acts. For instance, taking the raping case of Delhi into consideration, "Nirbhaya" wh is one of the girls out of many raped in India, there was a lot of protest which happened , media played a very important role, her culprits were sent to the prison and given harsh punishments as per the law and order, but that didn't change anything, still several cases of rapes are a common story each day highlighted in newspapers, televisions, social sites and many more. The reason being the root cause of the issue needs to be analysed and eradicated than enforcing "cure" method. Here lack of moral education is the fundamental problem which needs to be imparted, starting from home. Instead of teaching daughters how to dress or what time she should come home, education should be given to the sons of the family and teach them respect .
Another such major issue wich can not be treated by Laws is the debauchery or Corruption. This issue is prevailing across the globe and is a source of many other problems like vast difference among rich and poor, lack of education, Government policies not executed correctly. Again, such issues have serious punishments but are so widespread and common that law is unable to bring the level down. In this case, law makers are themselves law breakers,a crime as big as accepting bribe and releasing a culprit from prison or as petty as the debauchery of high level officers who take away the grains, pulses which were intended to be given to the soldiers and sell them in the open market to earn money. These issues are not likely to be changed as law cannot change the minds and hearts of the people.
Hence to conclude, there is a lot that laws can succeed in, but its not a "cure all" .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d in, but its not a 'cure all' .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85681293303 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78676709242 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586605080831 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.126492823 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4375 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250339314649 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833685718986 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522674911276 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133440797782 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531243992768 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.