Essay topics: In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
No one gainsays that any types of organizations require professional workers in order to make a great contribution to a new discovery and achievement. In this context, some people are in the opinion that the novice is more likely to make such contributions, in that they are passionate and creative as they are prone to make a number of assumptions and questions. However, not everyone agrees on such position. There are certainly benefits in experienced professionals to create a great achievement.
First and foremost, some people argue that a beginner is passionate and enthusiastic to learn new things as well as creative enough to make a great contribution. This is mainly due to the fact that everything that they face is novel and something that they have to learn. Thereby, they start to make a number of questions and challenge the conventional assumption; why we should take A route not B route to reach a goal; what if we take the B route, would it be better or worse than do A way? This questions and trials give rise to a more efficient way or discovery. For example, Steve Jobs, a co-founder of Apple, was such a creative and curious person. He once wondered why other people said that portable computers were impossible, and then he challenged the idea by creating his own one, which is now prevalently used by most of people in the world. Likewise, a novice can be adventurous and creative and attempt to finding new things which often lead to a great achievement.
However, what was alluded to above should not be overgeneralized to all context. Alongside those advantages of beginners, there are more benefits in experts. First of all, the experienced are equipped with a wider range of knowledge and experience than the tenderfoot. They can make more accurate, precise, effective, and reliable solutions to multifaceted problems that we encounter. That is why people, for instance, prefer to visit experienced and professional doctors to cure serious diseases rather than to get treated by resident doctors. Secondly, the expert is generally more efficient at saving time and other inputs of resources to resolve the problems than the beginners. As for a novice, they need to go through a number of trials and mistakes to reach the appropriate solution, whereas the experienced can understand a pattern of the issues as well as the proper solution at the same time. That is why a lot of companies seek to hire experienced experts, as they have better problem and solving skills.
Therefore, it can be concluded that experts generally have higher capacity to figure out problems and make proper and reliable solution, but also they are more efficient in the limited time than the beginner.
To sum up, there is no denying the fact that the novice is passionate and creative to make a important contribution. However, the advantages of the experts seem to outweigh that of the beginners, in terms of experts' knowledgeable and experienced approach to solve a problem. Therefore, we should make an effort to encourage new beginners to continue their career and become more experienced in order to make a effective achievement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...n one, which is now prevalently used by most of people in the world. Likewise, a novice can be...
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Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...vice is passionate and creative to make a important contribution. However, the ad...
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Line 8, column 409, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ecome more experienced in order to make a effective achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2627.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98481973435 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98538725151 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9685345227 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.217391304 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9130434783 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4347826087 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142766840256 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405993194811 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262454995239 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867353088301 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130513510985 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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