Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws.
The world is consisting huge number of society which are containing different laws & different views for that laws. Each society actually mixed up with so many laws comunsurating their peoples view. Despite every laws should be for decorated in order to the welfare of the societies peoples, ironically some laws are found to be unjustified for the peoples of that society. So the the peoples should be thought once before performing a duty which based upon the law. Therefore, It’s a foremost duty for each & every people of the society to concern about their responsibility of obeying the laws which seems ethical and justified while also should cautious of precluding & resisting the unjustified laws.
From the ancient times, there had been two types of laws which exist in every particular society which are usually created for keep the consistency of the serenity of that society. These two types of laws classified into justified & unjustified laws. Though every judgement department of a government has claimed that every laws they issued are justified perfectly, the peoples of the society find some laws are unethical & biased for some particular groups. For example, before the revolution of May Day every single labor of Europe have to work for several hours beyond their working capability while the factory owners find this law perfect as it beneficial for them. Finding unethical this specific labor law ,the labors gainsaid again this law & by giving up their daily work they protest against this law. Finally, as the factory owners were staunching on them ,so they were genial with the labor to cut short the working time in according to their demands.
How over, while this was an example of ancient time resisting unethical law, in modern times there is a huge need to obey the ethical laws for helping the govt. to run a specific country. For instance, in the third world counties the tax for importing a foreign car is almost double of the original value of the car which is found to be unjustified for the rich people of the country. But in broader sense , it is justified laws because the government need this tax money for the welfare of the country such as they need to widened the road if there are so many personal car in the country. With that unrealistic tax money ,they can do that.
After all this discussion, the synopsis can have a view that whether the law is ethical or unethical the individuals of the society should have an insightful eyes to analyze each laws before performing or resisting them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, third, while, after all, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9023255814 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53779973677 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46976744186 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4672353691 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195913186979 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749985176311 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592720052253 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133061603904 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503211648037 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.