Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is through the officials appointed at various levels that the government is able to carry out its agenda. At certain times, when the probity of the government is being impugned, it is inevitable to question if these officials are equally responsible. If the government employees are able to exercise their own judgement can we blame them for playing accomplice in wrongful acts. However, these officials have mostly executive powers and do not have the authority to question. This system seems practical but also offers demerits of its own.
If all the government officials start exercising their own judgement on orders passed to them, it will result in chaos. Different people might have different views on same subject and if they are to act according to what they feel is righteous, then they will act differently. For instance the police force may be ordered to provide protection to people participating in gay pride parade. Some of the officers with parochial views may not find such orders in accord with their beliefs. If they were to act according to their own judgement, it would result in chaos, where some of the police force will try and protect the participants where as others might condemn the practice. Moreover, the decision making powers should rest with the government heads who have a bigger picture and decisions are well debated in the parliament.
Also, sometimes it may be the case of outright malfeasance by the boss, where in, the subordinates should act. For instance, if a government official knows about venal acts of the ruling party, he should blow the whistle on them. If an officer is asked to report false figures of budget expenditure, aiding the politicians to appropriate the funds, he should rely on his judgement and not carry out the orders. It is in such black and white situations that officials must use their judgement. In other cases, where they are not aware of the whole picture, they should not intervene.
Thus, the statement is too strong in stating that the officials, no matter their rank, no matter the circumstances, should rely on their own judgement. Sometimes it is prudent to carry out the will of their seniors as they have a better handle on the current scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ople participating in gay pride parade. Some of the officers with parochial views may not f...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...gement, it would result in chaos, where some of the police force will try and protect the p...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...os, where some of the police force will try and protect the participants where as other...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...e will try and protect the participants where as others might condemn the practice. More...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206730769231 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.170673076923 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0841346153846 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0745192307692 0.0444667217837 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112980769231 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67940486593 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336538461538 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00721153846154 0.0016655270985 433% => OK
Determiners: 0.0961538461538 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0432692307692 0.0249443105267 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2235.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 377.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92838196286 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347480106101 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241379310345 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180371352785 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148541114058 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67940486593 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53050397878 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 58.4294100983 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9444444444 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9595711946 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 45.0823754789 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.26271186441 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457356965768 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0960081188131 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0626996522848 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523096258994 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147776311367 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194010486546 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738266373236 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.456368860644 0.385218514788 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0454737164114 0.0692045440612 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351083045406 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426166662632 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.