Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
There is no governor that does not have an issue to solve right away. Every day, governments have problems that need solutions immediately and most of this time, it is needing priority. These problems usually are related to social security, education, health care, safety, political issues and other areas that are the big relevance during a political administration. Because of that, governments should focus on fixing immediate issues related to the present, independently the problem’s reputation towards society.
It is understandable that trying to expect and solve a problem of the future is important and this can save time, money and/or work, and governments should do it when is it possible, but the governments should concentrate on today´s issues before the citizens starting disapproval governor’s attitude.
One example is what is happening in Brazil, where the economy is passing through problems, which started in the last governors, making the Brazilians suffering because of the low investment in education, health care, and safety. This economical issue also affects the workers, making many people unemployed. Thus, this is a priority problem that Brazil has, and the governor is trying to adopt new ways to make the economy grow. One of the ways is changing the social security law; a very commented and criticized political attitude that is affecting the governor’s reputation, but it is a very important measure that will make the economy grow a lot in the few years, avoiding new problems and helping to solve what is happening now.
Another example is about the Great Recession occurred in the last decade. That period was extremely difficult for all countries over the world and most of them needed to make a big effort to cut the consequences over the economy, which affected all other sectors of a country, like safety and education.
In conclusion, governments should rank to solve issues that are happening today in order to avoid a snowballing and make everything worse. Sometimes is necessary that governments adopt new politics and laws that could reduce their reputation, but it is worthy for the goodness of a country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s immediately and most of this time, it is needing priority. These problems usually are re...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
... it is needing priority. These problems usually are related to social security, education, ...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: Is Sometimes
... snowballing and make everything worse. Sometimes is necessary that governments adopt new po...
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Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s worthy for the goodness of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27873563218 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95179010158 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531609195402 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1763816317 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.307692308 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259412564072 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914517733464 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861820520033 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148559447441 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971477133424 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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