Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
In a world full of problems everyone should do things to help to mitigate these issues by their own free will. Corporations must work under the law and it is necessary they fulfill it, while they are trying to make money and survive in a difficult world’s economy, with highs and lows. The responsibility to promote the well-being for citizens and environments refer to governments through laws and inspections and we can not exclude the government to its role.
It is true that if everyone does a little of effort to help the environment and the well-being of a society, the world would be in a better and safe place to live, having less problem with pollution, criminality, and immigration. But it is important to notice that our governments are the biggest responsible for our environment and society, making sure that any citizen or company fulfill the laws.
Governments, police and other agencies are responsible to make sure their population is having a good education, health care, workplace safety, healthy environment and so on. It is their function to supervise people and companies if they are after the rules. One of the ways is policing them and sue if it is necessary.
Besides it, corporations are in the market to make money, increase their economy and power through their deals. Companies exist to create jobs and help to develop cities, states or a country with money through taxes, and so, they are trying to make as much money as possible. Anyway, it is important for these corporations to invest to help the society and/or the environment, because it could attract more deals, that is profit for the company, making its market seeing with good eyes the corporation, working as a symbiosis: companies help a society and the environment where they run and the society buy or sell theirs stuffs, guaranteed a cycle of profits. Thus, it is not a corporate responsibility.
In conclusion, responsible for the well-being of a population and the environment belongs to a government and its agencies. When a company it is not after the rules and the agreements, the governor must obey them to do what is right and good for society, independently of how big it is this corporation and how much money they pay for taxes, helping the developing of a city.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, if, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89175257732 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91932842929 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487113402062 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5002113269 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.571428571 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248628839694 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891009313967 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528406947476 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146010560595 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262109972722 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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