"Most cultures encourage individuals to sacrifice a large part of their own personalities in order
to be like other people. Thus, most people are afraid to think or behave differently because
they do not want to be excluded."
In todays world where the originality and individuality are being lost in the stygian of culture, societal norms and current trends, one must always look forward to break themselves out of these menacles. To realize one's own personalities and charcter traits and own it is a liberation in itself and must be Highly encouraged. Alas! it always has been impeded by societies and cultures toiling to wrap around a group of humans and generalizing them till the point where they are forced to give their sense of individuality. A significant number of cultures impose and enjoy the hegemony on its people where most of them had no choice to opt out, being born in the first place. They lead to people giving up large proportions of their individual personalities to be familiar to the group. I strongly agree with the imperialism most cultures possess becuase of two salient reasons.
Most cultures are ancient and have failed to catch up with time. They curtail an individual's sense of expression hindering the growth of ones personality. Cultures provide a simulacrum of a community of people living together and how their ancestors had lived and encompasses the life style and expressions of life the collective of humans in that culture had relied on for long periods of time. Citing an example of a small village in the state of Gujarat, in India, the cultural hegemony proscribes women from wearing anything they want and someone who evinces any signs of aberration from the same must expiate. Habiliments are one of the primary ways we express ourself in the world. It is how we want the world to perceive us in our own unique way of living. It is the most accurate depcition of our personalities and the character traits we feel comfortable to put show the world. Curtailing that results in an individual losing an important form of selfexpression.
The significant number of cultures propagate superstitions and misguided beliefs even in this modern age. There are examples of cognitive dissonanace in most cultures regarding "Mental Health" is baffling and concerning. For example, in a study conducted around the world, it was found that the mental health was still a taboo and disregarded predominantly in South Asian cultures. We witness the results of these cultural dominance and corresponding sucide deaths soar in numbers.
The cultures discourage critical thinking. Many examples can be provided of renowned thinkers who were despised by their cultures because of their critical thinking abilities. The cultures try to maintain a similar thinking standard that are ancient and obsolete and refuse to update themselves with time.
Though one might counter, that most cultures are an important part of one's personalities and that humans being convivial beings must need to interact with people and culture a plays a role in that, it can be easily dismissed by stating the fact that number of Human beings giving up on their lives is tantamount to the number of humans purportedly benefitting from it. In conclusion, most cultures are primary reason in a large number of people being coerced to give up on their personalities and be like their peers bounded by the cultural norms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2677.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06049149338 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88694052939 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502835538752 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 852.3 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5564702982 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.391304348 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347424309685 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950755512384 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861765791155 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190349356656 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951367425814 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.