A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter
college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic
courses to offer."
The author asserts that the nation should must all its students to study the same curriculum until they enter college and not allow schools in different parts to decide which academic courses to offer. I totally disagree with the speaker's point of view because if every person has the same courses to study, there will not be any diversity. diversity in the subjects is always required because it helps the person to explore new things.
For example, the great Indian Batman Sachin Tendulkar started playing cricket at the age of 4. During his first days, he focussed more on batting and not anything else. By the age of 10, he had a played lot of First-class cricket and the state level championships. he debuted his career in International cricket at the age of 16 and became the best cricketer. he became the best because he had the choice of choosing his own subject.
Another example, the great Indian actor Hrithik Roshan started his career at the age of 6. he has debuted with the short films and later became the greatest actor of all the time. he has chosen this career due to diversity.
To sum up, I feel that schools should offer different courses and not the same curriculum for everyone.
People will get to choose their subjects and started mastering them from an earlier age. it helps them to set their path for the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Diversity
...study, there will not be any diversity. diversity in the subjects is always required beca...
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...cket and the state level championships. he debuted his career in International cri...
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...ge of 16 and became the best cricketer. he became the best because he had the choi...
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...han started his career at the age of 6. he has debuted with the short films and la...
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...ame the greatest actor of all the time. he has chosen this career due to diversity...
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...ted mastering them from an earlier age. it helps them to set their path for the fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67088607595 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35892527999 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0765892362 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175062497354 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565045676566 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137129328302 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10886518325 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135334008892 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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