A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The prompt recommends that the same national curriculum should be used through out the country until students enter college. I agree with the given claim for the below given reasons.
Firstly, every student in the country who participates in competitive exams will have a fair chance if all have the same academic knowledge. For instance, a student wants to do his college in a different state rather than doing from his state. There's an entry test which must be given and get a certain average inorder to get admitted into that college. The test covers a curriculum that is not a part of his state or school syallabus. In order to pass this test, he will have to take extra classes or coaching besides from studying his own subjects. The high schools these days are already pressuring a student in terms of education. If each state has the same syllabus, it would be easier for a student write the entry exams and get into any college from any state that he/she wants.
Secondly, after students enter into college, they will be in a room where everybodys' knowlege is on the same level if the national curriculum was same, no less or no more. It would be difficult for a college student to understand the subject if the basics were not covered in his high school. It would be difficult for teachers as well, if a class conains students from different academic backgrounds.
To summorize, having the same national curriculum until students enter college actually helps in terms of having a fair chance of competitive exam participation and there after in college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...state rather than doing from his state. Theres an entry test which must be given and g...
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...ege from any state that he/she wants. Secondly, after students enter into coll...
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...e of competitive exam participation and there after in college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83394833948 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55560031817 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527675276753 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0954741768 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196223523294 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755268163492 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659415671935 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149774204128 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384285852326 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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