Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Τhe phenomenon of climate change is in nowadays the most important threat for our ecosystem and all the scientific community is delving into the main reason what cause the above phenomenon and stress the ruling class to take immediate actions before it is too late. However, the majority of the governments are not constinent with their promises about strict regulations which will alleviate and decline the phenomenon. It is my personal belief that each government should protect at any cost the remaining wilderness areas in their territories and supplement this action with beneficial environmental policy.
However, that is not mean that the wilderness areas should not be seized on for economic gain. An environmentally properly usage of the wilderness area is not rule out the expected profit of these areas. For instance, these natural and virgin areas could be used as natural parks with tickets for the visitors and the organization of various activities, like hiking and biking.
On the other side, it is crucial, that each government will prioritize the preservation of the wilderness area in comparison with the economical benefit. At the global emissions of CO2 is steadily increasing as also the air temperature, it is very important the preservation of the wild forests. The forest are the pneumonias of the earth as produce oxygen and absorve CO2. For example, the destruction of the wild forests in Amazon due to forest fires the last year will have a tremendous impact on the augmentation of the temperature the next years.
Moreover, these wilderness areas are the physical habitat of thousands species and a possible destruction of them would have a fatal result to an endangered species. The preservation of the biodiversity is very crucial as each year more and more species are included in the list with the endangered species.
To conclude up, the preservation of the wilderness areas should be a priority for each government independently the possible economic gain of these areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Τhe phenomenon of climate change is in nowadays the most important threat for our ecosy...
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... with beneficial environmental policy. However, that is not mean that the wilde...
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...us activities, like hiking and biking. On the other side, it is crucial, that e...
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...rvation of the wild forests. The forest are the pneumonias of the earth as produce ...
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...ion of the temperature the next years. Moreover, these wilderness areas are the...
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...the list with the endangered species. To conclude up, the preservation of the ...
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... possible economic gain of these areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19692307692 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96078352016 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3666196395 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293043225424 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108324112025 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967850242695 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17473236921 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103898403371 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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