No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In current time, when everyone is being professional and society needs real revolutionary personalities then there is a need of encouraging people to gain incorporate knowledge and experience outside field cause knowledge about individual field does not make any significant difference in long term planning.
In mankind evolution, every branch of study is interconnected with each other. Without mixing it with each other at certain time, this much progress is not possible. Consider an example of car engineer, he has to possess a knowledge of chemical and mechanical engineering because he needs to design a mechanical model and choose a appropriate fuel type. In cinematography a great movie is defined with best camera effect, best story and best acting which makes cinematography as multidisciplinary branch if it wants a significant progress. As a computer manufacturer needs both software and hardware experts. When Turing published a paper about automata machines and Turing ‘s test, at that time he does not even knew that this mathematical theory opened a new bridge of thinking computer science. But this things does not come directly. These things demand lots of experience to be improve every day. So, we can say without relating branch with each other and applying experience, it is impossible to make significant progress.
In 21st century, enterprise builders found out about value of experience so they made experience of real industrial work for any important position. Every experience from outside the field adds important values in current work .Working with multiple branch together gives new insights and new way of interpretation of same thing.. As someone said, “ I did not fail, I find out new way which does not work”. Even Edison failed so many times before inventing bulb. Elon musk rocket launching project got failed so many times. Steve jobs had to resign from his own company and managed pixar. So every experience with other branch helps to improve significantly.
Although some may argue that experience of outside field leads to destruction. If we mix up working of all branches. It is hard to govern them all. So many question risen up like how to provide them funding or how to promote one department and which one to demote? But this can be solved using experience and incorporate knowledge.
A person without practical knowledge and experience may survive in the world but does not led to any significant improvement to society so it is important for everyone to incorporate the knowledge and experience outside the field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of chemical and mechanical engineering because he needs to design a mechanical ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to design a mechanical model and choose a appropriate fuel type. In cinematograph...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...cinematography a great movie is defined with best camera effect, best story and best acti...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...movie is defined with best camera effect, best story and best acting which makes cinem...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'significant progress'.
Suggestion: significant progress
...as multidisciplinary branch if it wants a significant progress. As a computer manufacturer needs both ...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...s;s test, at that time he does not even knew that this mathematical theory opened a ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ridge of thinking computer science. But this things does not come directly. These th...
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Suggestion: Working
... adds important values in current work .Working with multiple branch together gives new...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... new way of interpretation of same thing.. As someone said, ' I did not fail,...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anch helps to improve significantly. Although some may argue that experience of outsi...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of outside field leads to destruction. If we mix up working of all branches. It i...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...ches. It is hard to govern them all. So many question risen up like how to provide them fundi...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...e may survive in the world but does not led to any significant improvement to socie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23317307692 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96858454849 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.466149752 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.652173913 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26086956522 5.21951772744 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200957962941 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051768939094 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538978765792 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131219104427 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421356387614 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.