No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
humans have come a long way in their evolutionary trail, developing and perfecting different skills along the way. these skill sets were then categorized, smiliar skills together, for convinience to form fileds. Generations to come have experimented, found what is best to them, and chosen these fields and followed suit. though the skills sets needed for different fields are different when looked at them from a high level view, when analysing them in a more in depth manner reveals the similarities and the corelations that exist among these fields. when developing a given field, the suiters of that field lose the ability to see beyond a boundary due to hard binding into a specific skill set. However the suiters of naother field may see the aforementioned dark scope, due to the skillsets they are perfecting. A relevent knowledge transfer from the field that percieves this knowledge to a field that does not percieve this knowledge could result in the development of the latter field. Furethermore, the constructive criticism and the amendments done to the transferred knowledge can result in more thorough enlightement in the field that originally percieved the said knowledge. it is comming from this stream of argument that I agree with the statement that no field of study can advance significanlty unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
mathematics is known to be one of the puresest fields known to human kind. it is pure in the sense, that it is solely based on abstract theories, and every theories in mathematics does not need any practical proof or clarification. physics on the other hand, is heavily dependent on the practicality. physics bases mathematics at its foundation for advancing its theories. In this way physics incorporates knowledge from mathematics to the advancement of it. but here is the twist. The world renown physisist, specifically lauded and praised for the discovery of the concept of gravity, was one of the key contributors to the mathematics. He invented the derivatives, which now composes a huge branch in mathematics - Calculus. The knowledge transfer between these two fields have allowed the significant developmnet of the fields. Despite such transfer, either field might not have advanced to the extent that they have come upto now.
Now let us consider a younger field of study - machine learning. machine learning at its core implements linear algebra and statistics. but in past decades, it has borrowed knowledge from an unlikely field-communication theory. though it is less intuitive how communication theory would bolster develop the field of machine learning, it can be safely said that the awe and accolades that machine learning recieves, would have not exist if there was no such field as communication theory. key components of machine learning models like binary cross entropy, categorical cross entropy are borrowed knowledge from communication theory.
The synergy between fileds is a vital requirement for continued, faster, signiicant growth in them. this allows the approach of "divide and conquer" approach for the acadamia. this borrowal of knowledge hinders redundacny which allows the significant improvement of fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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humans have come a long way in their evolution...
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...fecting different skills along the way. these skill sets were then categorized, smili...
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... chosen these fields and followed suit. though the skills sets needed for different fi...
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... high level view, when analysing them in a more in depth manner reveals the simil...
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...elations that exist among these fields. when developing a given field, the suiters o...
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...nd experience from outside that field. mathematics is known to be one of the puresest fiel...
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...d any practical proof or clarification. physics on the other hand, is heavily dependent...
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... heavily dependent on the practicality. physics bases mathematics at its foundation for...
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...nger field of study - machine learning. machine learning at its core implements linear ...
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...ued, faster, signiicant growth in them. this allows the approach of 'divide and...
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...onquer' approach for the acadamia. this borrowal of knowledge hinders redundacn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2732.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3568627451 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05617321207 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 840.6 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.993471129 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.185185185 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07407407407 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289632800602 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744561514827 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862555001973 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151155800393 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623963903952 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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