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People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.

Critics and acclaims, both are the essential feedbacks for any system, work and discovery. Just acclaims helps in motivating the peoples, critics also helps in finding holes in any aspect. Thus , critics encourages the people to work on those holes. The prompt mentioned above mentions that the experts in any field are the ones who raises questions regarding the problems or drawbacks of that particular field. I moderately agree with the claim for three reasons. It is further delineated in the paragraphs mentioned below.
To begin with, through and rational critics can only be made by those who have sound knowledge in that matter. Those who are not familiar with the simple knowhow of any matter can’t raises questions regarding it. For example, doctor who cures patients and prescribes medicines to patients know the side hazards that these medicines impart in the patients body. Laymen cannot simply depict such hazards. Moreover, dietary specialists recommend the amount of dietary intake required for people, they can give possible detrimental effects of over intake of particular food items. These examples clearly illustrated that the expert people can point the critical aspects in that field.
Secondly, History suggests that improvements in theory, practices and technologies are only made by the people who had devoted their dedication and time in their works. Finding the drawbacks of the previous system and making proper corrections are done by the people having been deeply committed to any theory. Laws and policies are amended as per the present needs. For example , laplace corrected the spend of sound in gas given by newton. It was serendipitous for laplace to made correction in newton’s theory for speed of sound in gas. However, it was his coomitment and dedication that made him possible to do so. This example further proves that critics in idea or policy can be made by the ones having sound knowledge on those matters.

In all cases, however, most critical might not be those who are deeply committed to idea or plocy. Though, It is mostly true that those criticism are unconstructive. Some people or groups are so deep rooted in any cause or beliefs. If any theories that challenge those beliefs are put forward, they question such theories blindfolded. To cite an example, Nicolaus copernicaus was criticized heavily and even was jaled when he proposed that earth revolves around the sun rather than sun revolving the earth. The peoples who were critical of Copernicus were not literate , rather they were too dogmatic and orthodox. This suggests that the common people also could be the ones who are most critical if any idea. \
To sum up, these three reasons suggests that the mentioned prompt and argument are extremeny complex and require a much more expanded evaluation of social trends when there are ambiguous answers. The prompt seems true in case of constructive criticisms but common people also raise doubts and even condemn those ideas or policies without detailed and rigorous study.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in all cases, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2547.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16632860041 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56778126827 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535496957404 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6723844888 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9642857143 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6071428571 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325584985563 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805458772603 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100663982913 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163338220735 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10904986265 0.0667264976115 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in all cases, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments