People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I believe that for making a decision good enough, it is important to first logically analyze all the factors on which it should be based and then only, arrive at a conclusion. I do not however say that people who choose emotions to be the driving factor behind their decisions are a total failure at making decisions but they might end up in making decisions which are not so effective.
When a person is experiencing emotional glut, then he is more likely to choose that path which he finds suitable at that particular time and might later regret it. But, in order to prove themselves right, later end up justifying these decisions on logic based reasoning. There can be several ways to illustrate this position. Let us say, we went out shopping and started to buy things based on how attached we got to them in first sight rather than looking up at their price would be unreasonable. We could find things which could seem so right for us and in that moment we might get attached to it. We could thus keep buying several things this way and at the end of the day we would realize how much we actually kept spending and which wasn't right. Another example could be, that there's a boy and his parents have dream that he becomes a doctor. So, this boy who is strongly attached to his parents and doesn't want to hurt their feelings , takes up medical sciences and grows up to be a doctor. Here, his decision of taking up this discipline of medical sciences wasn't based upon his interests and logical reasoning of what he could have done better. He might not turn out to be a bad doctor, but he could have been exceptionally well at something else, had he not based his decision completely on emotions. Justifying this already made decision later by logic just to make himself feel better wouldn't do any good.
However, there are few circumstances where decisions based on emotion take an edge over the decisions purely based on logic. This can be exemplified by a situation where a girl decides to educate a poor kid sacrificing her own leisure time. If she would have taken this decision based on logic entirely, she might not have resulted in helping out this poor kid. Logically she herself would need some free time to divert her mind from the regressive courses that she might be taking, but her emotions and care for others and her willingness to help out the needy, drove her decision to teach the kid. All in all, I would say that people who make decisions and later justify those decisions with logic aren't poor decision makers, their decisions might just be less effective in the long run as compared to people who choose logic over emotions while decision making.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59832635983 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39835762163 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504184100418 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8470534004 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292260423526 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102640518513 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101524813846 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238023217206 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080522432515 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.