Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The ever-growing and ever-increasing technical enhancements across all fields aiming to simplify lives of people has definitely succeeded in its motive of doing so. Today our lives have become so much simpler with new tools and gadgets coming in. Time consuming calculations are easily handled by a calculator and the time saved there could be used elsewhere for effective utilization. Earlier people used to write letters and post them which would take a lot of days to reach the receiver's address. Now with just a click of button we can communicate with our loved ones no matter how far apart we stay. Technology has indeed helped us all stay connected. Earlier only pamphlets, hoardings and newspapers were the means by which we could know what was happening where. But now, we have become even more aware of what is happening all around the world through television and radio. Nowadays, it has been so easy to travel around the world, we simply have to take out a car, get on a train or catch a flight. These transportation means turn out to be real time-savers. With the era of computers it became so easy to solve byzantine industrial problems and since then we have evolved more and more. The field of medical sciences with technology coming into picture has been able to fight with such diseases that were life threatening and a nightmare to people. These are not the only fields where technology jumped in to make our lives more comfortable and worth of living but there are several other areas as well. Every coin has two sides, similarly in the process of making technology the base of our lives, it has left some loopholes where in turn it makes our lives intricate. This can be exemplified by the fact that though mobile phones are so handy now-a-days, the elderly still are in opposition to it and want to use landlines because its not easy for them to understand the functionality of this new device. Another thing is that , it is commonly seen that a close knitted family, though is sitting together but each one is engrossed in their own set of gadgets. This has led to a decline in family bonding. Also. children instead of wanting to go outdoors for playing insist on staying indoors for playing video-games. Technological advances though have solved all major intricacies of today's human subsistence, it has failed at some points which cannot be overlooked but definitely can be worked upon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1941, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f this new device. Another thing is that , it is commonly seen that a close knitte...
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Line 1, column 2120, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: As well
...has led to a decline in family bonding. Also. children instead of wanting to go outd...
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Line 1, column 2120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...has led to a decline in family bonding. Also. children instead of wanting to go outd...
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Line 1, column 2126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...d to a decline in family bonding. Also. children instead of wanting to go outdoors for p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, still, then, well, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79567307692 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68246617782 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.83477175 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161899649492 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458057934192 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433611783094 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161899649492 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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