People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
While making decisions, one should always logically predict the consequences of the decisions. People should always analyze the advantages and disadvantages of a each probable solution to a problem and then stick to the most optimum solution. People cannot base their decisions merely on emotions, because that might lead them to dire. For example when I was in class 12th, I was admitted in a boarding school for the first time;I was missing my parents, siblings, home persistently and was on urge to go back. However, I didn't do that because I was aware that I should drop an academic year in that case. I stayed in hostel, decided to deal with my homesickness, focused on my studies and got admitted in an prestigious graduation college in India. Now, I'm happy for doing that; Now, I can go home frequently,spend sufficient time with my family and of course excel in my career.
People shouldn't succumb themselves to emotional urges, this doesn't mean people shouldn't be emotional. Being emotional is inherent to human beings. But, in amok emotional states like anger, fear, love, avaricious greed people tend to behave absurdly, impatiently which lead them to devastating problems. For example in anger people screed their loved ones which may effect their relationships.
To conclude, people who make decisions based on frenzied emotions cannot make most desirable solutions to a problem, people should think, act patiently, effectively and logically in such difficult situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...yze the advantages and disadvantages of a each probable solution to a problem and...
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Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... and was on urge to go back. However, I didnt do that because I was aware that I sho...
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Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o back. However, I didnt do that because I was aware that I should drop an academ...
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Line 1, column 708, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cused on my studies and got admitted in an prestigious graduation college in India...
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Line 1, column 757, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...gious graduation college in India. Now, Im happy for doing that; Now, I can go hom...
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Line 1, column 811, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , spend
...oing that; Now, I can go home frequently,spend sufficient time with my family and of c...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...of course excel in my career. People shouldnt succumb themselves to emotional urges, ...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...umb themselves to emotional urges, this doesnt mean people shouldnt be emotional. Bein...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...motional urges, this doesnt mean people shouldnt be emotional. Being emotional is inhere...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...eople screed their loved ones which may effect their relationships. To conclude, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22083333333 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88046280521 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1476792217 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214402854101 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743354725565 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910488370541 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173652846778 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107121813993 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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