People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The human race is entirely bonded with each other with a thread of emotions. Without emotions, we all are just moving objects. Emotions like love, anger ,care ,happiness are present in everyone of us. But decision making under influence of these emotions is not fruitfull in majority of scenarios. We have to keep emotions aside for rational thinking. It is not that, emotions should be completely omitted from decision making, on the contrary, these should be considered at the last stage after decision making to see how these will affect the majority.
Military services, doctors and our government authorities are few examples of professions where we need to make a perfect balance between emotions and thinking. For instance, government authorities make different rules and laws, impact of these rules is not same for every citizen, for some these are good but on the other hand for others, these seemed to be a loss. However, if the government considers the emotion for every person of their country they cannot reach a particular conclusion, so it is necessary to take it into consideration that maximum people should support the presented law. Similarity, for healthcare professionals they never give priority to their emotions at the working hours.
It is scientifically proven fact that most of decisions taken under influence of emotions results in regret or those furthur only enhanced the complexities of concerned persons. We scared to conclude something with our mind only, sometimme we take extrmemes steps in rage or love, and it is quiet clear tht such incidents only results in loss , which could be of life, or physicallu or mentally.
Albeit, emotions are the only reasons which makes us coplete human otherwise we all are working machines. Because of emotions only our lives are beautiful and seems like a blessing. But in personal part also, sommetime we encounter certain situations where we are complelled to take decisions after coming out the shadow of emotions. For example, punishments given by parents, teachers to students is in such case, they keep aside their emotions and take decisions for the betteremnt of the child.
In conclusion, extreme of everything is bad, it is also true in the case of emotions. Emotions are imperative for the survival of the human race but a balanced form of emotions and thinking ability definitely increases our decision-making ability and will proved to be a strength of us. Hence, it is under our control to make wise choices where to be emotional and where be rational.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the decisions') or simply say ''most decisions''.
Suggestion: most of the decisions; most decisions
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'prove'
Suggestion: prove
...es our decision-making ability and will proved to be a strength of us. Hence, it is un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12679425837 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78418114776 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531100478469 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3440934542 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.789473684 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222822619048 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742402270404 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640893376622 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138186029246 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057766608734 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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