People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Decision making is an art that affects people around directly or indirectly. The establishment can be related to governance, corporate or household and in all these situations, decision making is the fuel that either ignite the engine or makes it rot. Taking correct decisions involve analytical thinking of understanding the alternatives and their impacts before the decision being taken.
But human beings are emotional creatures. We attach each event in our lives to an emotion to absorb it better. Therefore, each decision is always driven by some amount of emotional attachment to the situation but interferes with the logical aspect of it. The entire research of understanding of the setup is disrupted by emotional hormones of the person which create a bias towards or against the options that he/ she may like or hate respectively.
Consider a situation of a judge in which the defendant is his relative but is guilty. The decision will be made on the stand of logic around all the proofs submitted to the court of law and not on the basis of the genetic similarity between the judge and the defendant.
In our daily lives, advertisements always try to aim at our emotional sentiment. Marketing experts use emotions as their tools to find a place in the consumers' hearts and make them go buy their products. If logic was used on a higher priority than emotions, the entire tables of the market will overturn and things might be a little easier too.
Hence, in my opinion, decisions based on emotions are biased and justifying them with logic is just like apologizing after a crime. Emotional biases might look good in the vicinity of the situation but using logic more than emotions is the front runner in the race of decision making.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...in our lives to an emotion to absorb it better. Therefore, each decision is always dri...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246056782334 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.160883280757 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0757097791798 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0315457413249 0.0497285424764 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0473186119874 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129337539432 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0473186119874 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75360635766 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220820189274 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.0016655270985 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.129337539432 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018927444795 0.0249443105267 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01261829653 0.0148568991511 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1750.0 2732.02544248 64% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91216216216 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371621621622 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246621621622 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192567567568 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128378378378 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75360635766 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 62.4488356531 55.4138127331 113% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1428571429 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8349012193 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 45.805019305 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.76315789474 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120145644689 0.391690518653 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11171462629 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0804393837042 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569127990981 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184473345479 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589198021805 0.161403998019 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611238216481 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343317401299 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0615841237789 0.0692045440612 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868871204718 0.275328986314 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421596325161 0.0653680567796 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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