People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The issue brought up by the topic, whether someone could be seen as a poor decision maker when they use their emotion as their foremost basis in making a new decision is a contentious one. Admittedly, logic is a great necessity when it comes to decision making. Nonetheless, I generally disagree with the opinion that the use of emotion will always set someone to be a poor decision maker. Thus, I would argue that in certain cases, emotion are needed in a decision making process and does not degrade the quality of decision one makes.
First and foremost, when it comes to decision being made by a person, the value or quality of it could not easily be judged by just anyone. The value of a decision in itself is very much relative to every different person who evaluates them through different perspectives. One could argue that certain decision is poor based on the backlash they receive right after making the decision. On the other hand, someone else might see the decision to be precisely what is needed in the situation if they look at the long-term effect the decision might engendered.
To illustrate the relativity stated above, let us see the analogy of a high school graduate looking for a major to be studied in college. In this case, a boy has a great enjoyment is only to be found when he is playing music, but does not necessarily have such good gift of skill in the practice. In the other hand the boy has scintillating skill when it comes to mathematics and numbers that is not accompanied by enjoyment in the subject itself. The emotion he felt for playing music played a fundamental role in his decision making process to go to a college with a good music program without a scholarship rather than follow through to another college with math scholarship. Logic will of course propelled him from going down this road inundated by risks.
This decision the boy made could be considered as a poor one or a good one depending on the lens we try to scrutinize it. To be seen through the economic lens, the decision is a poor one because it presents bigger economical loss and risks. However, from the psychological lens, we could claim he made a good decision because he would spend the next four years or more of his life doing what he loves. The love he had for music will even augment the chance of his skill to be ameliorated during his time in college. The chance of snatching another scholarship later is also still open in front of him. Thus, this decision he made on the base of emotion could not and should not be undermined.
Logic might regularly be a better bet in the scope of decision making. Nevertheless, there will always be situations in which emotions are essential to be considered before we decide on important things in life. After all, we are all human and our emotion matter to us just as much - if not more than - other aspects of our lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'after all', 'of course', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207885304659 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.172043010753 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752688172043 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537634408602 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0663082437276 0.0444667217837 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125448028674 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0501792114695 0.0406280797675 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56273631795 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0304659498208 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.0016655270985 215% => OK
Determiners: 0.112903225806 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286738351254 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179211469534 0.0148568991511 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2896.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 519.0 452.878318584 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57996146435 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300578034682 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225433526012 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138728323699 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0847784200385 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56273631795 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462427745665 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.7435364215 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5909090909 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.960396936 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5909090909 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 46.1342616921 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.31288343558 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118785134739 0.391690518653 30% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11846468048 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763886063566 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539585670395 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112267667239 0.149214159877 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564515953558 0.161403998019 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039666351884 0.0892212321368 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410695921736 0.385218514788 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962658708961 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928928454316 0.275328986314 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354245910789 0.0653680567796 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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