People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supp

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People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Behaviour is an inherent attribute of human beings whose cause is often dubious. The way we react in our life to our surroundings, is it a reflection of our own selves or does it get its root from external forces? The fact that one’s behaviour is a result of the naturally generated thoughts with in one’s mind shows that even in presence of external forces, it is ultimately up to an individual whether to get influenced by those forces or not.

From the ancient times in India as well as throughout the world, women have always been treated as inferior to men. Women due to the relatively soft construct of their bodies as opposed to men have never participated in great numbers or they have never been encouraged to participate in sports. Following this general trend, most women took up the job of caring for their families and children; spending almost their complete lives doing household chores. However, women like Mary Kom and Gita Phogat,- Indian Boxer and wrestler have proved that going against the norms for the purpose of one’s self-satisfaction and passion can make one what one has become now.

Moreover, the great leaders like Mahatma Gandhi and Jawaharlal Nehru have been the epitome of leadership with selflessness. At the time when India had been acquired by Britishers, there were millions of people suffering throughout the country and thousands of others had lost their lives. Mahatma Gandhi then was deeply saddened by looking at the grievances of the people took a responsibility to get the country rid of the foreign invaders. Though his attitude was influenced by the surroundings it was only his inner which helped him to decide to take a staunch stand for the independence of his country and his beloved countrymen and women.

On the other hand, the increase in the number and usage of social media platforms have largely shaped the perceptions of people based on what other people think. The augmenting need of the girls to look thinner and fairer has changed the way they behave in their routine life. As a result, people have become more conscious of their own selves. Several instances have come up recently that people drown in the river or flood while taking selfies with the deluge in the backdrop as a requirement to boast on social media.

Therefore, it is quite debatable to determine whether one’s behaviour is actually one’s own or rather influenced externally. Nevertheless, being rational beings it is always upon one to think over what defines one and one’s attitude towards people and one’s life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01856148492 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72847317504 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552204176334 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4226034612 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.235294118 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116432302134 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383386806655 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222863737375 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623858645489 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235824764779 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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