Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
There is no doubt that advancements in science and technology have helped humanity in many ways, but to say that science will one day be able to solve all of society's problems is going too far.
Research in science and technology have helped to solve many of society's problem. Polio, which was once considered deadliest of diseases is now completely eradicated from most parts of the world. Over the years, science has been able to find a cure for many illnesses, but at the same time there also some diseases for which cure has not yet been found. Take the example of cancer. Research for a cancer cure has been going on for most of the last century, but we are still nowhere near to completely eradicating cancer. Who knows, we might even find cancer cure over the next decade or the next century, but we can never say for sure that cancer cure will be found. Similarly, we can never be a hundred percent sure that science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society's problems.
Even if can solve most of our existing problems, there can be new issues that may come up in the future. We as humans never thought that our action can have an impact on forces of nature and our planet. Only recently in the late 20th century that we started to observe the effects of global warming on our environment and weather patterns. Even if we can solve the problem of global warming, there may be new challenges waiting for us in the future, and the cycle of problems and finding the solution for it can repeat over and over again.
Science and technology will help us to solve many of our problems, but it is very hard to say whether it will be able to solve all of our problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45192307692 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28744455964 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9538488463 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377760298119 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159684880745 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209349964286 0.0758088955206 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313828404725 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160910422606 0.0667264976115 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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