Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It's the resposibility of every human being to nurture and promote the well-being of the society in which they live in, and corporations should be no different.
We live in a society where every thing is interconnected. Success of our species depends on good cooperation between environment, plant and animal species. If anyone of these things is impacted , it can adversly effect the well being of the society. We can take an example of global warming. Due to rampant use of fossil fuels by industies to fullfil human needs, the weather has become increasingly volatile. This in turn has affected our society by increasing the frequency of storms at one part of the world and causing drought at other part. This adverse effect on our environment can be slowed down if corporations today take more resposibility and try to create a technology to reduce our dependency on fossil fuel.
Many Corporates are driven by the greed of making more profit, neglecting the well being of society and the very people they are trying to serve. This greed of making more money can lead to severe consequences to not only to society, but also to the corporations itself. Recently, there were two plane crashes involving Boeing's 737-max airplane. Investigation into these incidents revealed that Boeing ignored safety procedure in order to save money and make more profit. As a result of these crashes, entire Boeing's fleet of 737-max airplane was grounded and they incurred heavy loss, and not mention the loss of life.
Corporations are integral part of our society and as like any other person, corporates too have a resposibility towards the well-being of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its the resposibility of every human being ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s. If anyone of these things is impacted , it can adversly effect the well being o...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
Suggestion: to have
...nd as like any other person, corporates too have a resposibility towards the well-being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03623188406 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81480586581 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3023018438 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217729777964 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699397019027 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07893992277 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155426533538 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606798152487 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.