Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Indeed, the recent development of science and technology has thoroughly changed our world from the past. People facilitates the technology in managing daily tasks smoothly and making life easier. But the idea that science and technology will surely solve all of society's problems in the future is still on debates. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree of this statement since the society and technology are both managed by humans. It's hard to say that all the negative issues, poverty, health care, or crime rate, in our society will eventually be solved by technology.
Some people might argue the problems I mentioned above can still be eradicated by advanced technology systems. For example, governments may implement national-wide camera-monitering system to stop potential crimes. Also, they can maintain a database containing all household incomes of citizens for enacting higher wealth tax to subsidize poor people to fight poverty.
However, in those situations, the government who wants to solve problems would be too strong and have many data on hands. That may temporarily solve the problems, but then creates new society issues, like dictatorship of the government, eventually causes disputes, wars, and again, crime rate and poverty problems reappear.
Therefore, I believe science and technology is able to solve some society's problems. But it is too extreme to say technology can solve "all" society's issues, given that the society and technology are both managed by humans.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45493562232 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92438176273 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9555012164 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409204117515 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147288728029 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124442063256 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236985633703 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146282496426 0.0667264976115 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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