Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The speaker suggests that business or science students shouldn't be required to take courses in the Humanities, in believing that those courses are useless for their careers. I consider the speaker is being too extreme in this statement and I believe those courses should be made compulsory to all students.
First of all, to make students be well-rounded people, the undergraduate education should let them explore their interests by taking all variety of courses. Being in their young age, university students should try possibilities as many as possible. Although for some students showing strong interests in some fields, we shall not limit them to those areas.
Moreover, for several courses in the Humanities, such as the courses about religion traditions or cultural preservation, they usually emphasize in relationship between humans and even between people and the environment, which is very essential to us no matter what field we work in the future. Without the sense of these kinds of knowledge, we may grow as avaricious and indifferent people being harmful to our societies.
Admittedly, the credit expenses may seem expensive for people who are not interested in those topics, I believe the government is responsible for funding students to take those courses. Only by learning these will students become more aware of our society and environment.
To sum up, I believe the undergraduate students should be required to take courses in the Humanities given that the courses can make students more well-rounded and empathetic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...gests that business or science students shouldnt be required to take courses in the Huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, well, of course, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34016393443 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92413652936 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5156500441 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306342820236 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128279273558 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098826287298 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181298930758 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910537865551 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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