Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organized sports.
The author states fact about sport that when sport drives young athletes at their best but discourages others who are not athletically talented. Any sport fuels on passion, zeal and get the best out of from the given situations. The professional sports viewers also demand for such qualities. I don’t think anyone would pay for tickets and travel to big stadiums to watch amateur play mundane game frivolously.
Competitive nature brings best out of the athletes, as we see during Olympics and World championships of any sports. The challenging nature improves the quality of the player and eventually the overall sport. Cristiano Ronaldo won’t be one of the greatest goal scorer in soccer without winning against world class defenders. Usain Bolt’s gold medals won’t be that worth if there were lack of competitive nature in the sprint running. Something like this is a milestone of the human race, denoting the fastest running human of generation. To achieve greatness, such great athletes welcomes challenging nature and win over the hurdles.
Tennis has become even more interesting that three greatest players of the generation are fighting with utmost competitive nature. It is hard to predict if Nadal, Federer or Djokovic will win the next grand slam. This excitement increases the number of viewers for the sport and improves the quality of the game. Sport is essentially an entertainment category, which teaches and motivates each viewer how to deal with the everyday life problems to achieve most out of it. The passion, hard work and zeal to be better at doing things are the vital qualities required to be successful in solving real world problems.
While it is true that competitive nature of the sport brings best out of athletes, it is not for every person to sustain such high pressure. When someone wins, there is someone who is on the other side of the game. It is possible that people get discouraged, anxious and maybe depressed. But it is individual’s choice, if they want play for entertainment or professionally. Since when professional sport is concerned it is assumed to get competitive for entertainment purpose, otherwise there won’t enough viewer to fund the sport. However, if someone is playing for relaxation, entertainment and recreation then there are casual sport options which won’t hurt anyone’s feeling.
In conclusion, individual lacking in athletic talents can avoid discouragement due to loss from sport, and play at non-professional level to get the entertainment or recreational part. And the professional athletes could fuel on the competitive nature of the sport.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34597156398 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01761876326 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8375160063 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0869565217 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178058046747 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052270153305 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721969181747 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112505769527 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625466105677 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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