Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as

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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.

Business giants play a key role in a society. They are not only the economical backbone of a country but also the essential element of the country's social, educational, and environmental needs. So, to lead the country towards successful nation, these corporations should also take part in the welfare of society and for the safe and healthy environment across the country.
The prosperity of industries is closely connected with the happiness and prosperity of society. If industries work across the country without taking care the financial and political situations across the country, corporations will also collapse with the
the falling country. For example, a technical engineering firm requires technically sound engineers, and if country is depriving of universities and institutions which are required to make these professionals, how could the industry run without them? And the situation will also get worse if universities do not have budgets to set a technical lab to train the engineers. Who will support the universities? If universities would not make these folks professionally sound, then how could the industry operate without them?The is is long to mention. So, with the government, corporations are also responsible to take care the educational need of a nation in which they operate.
Companies are responsible for the clean and secure environment across them. Industries create a lot of pollution as their waste, like smoke generated from turbines, chemicals wastage created by the garment and other chemical firms, heat from bulky machines and motors etc. This all created by the industries operating all over the country. If industries would not take care of this pollution, the discontented people will rebel against the industries and demand to clean the environment otherwise shut down the operation of the industry. So, the irresponsible nature of corporations could lead the country towards politically and socially worse conditions. Hence, to operate happily and safely in a country, corporation should take care of environmental welfare of the society.
However, companies are not only responsible for the welfare of society, but it is the responsibility of government as well to provide the safer and politically sound conditions across the country so that the corporations could do business easily. Because if companies would not do business, the whole economy of the country fall down, and no country could fight with economical break down without the support of business giants.
To do business in a good mood, Corporations should take part in the well-being of the environmental and social needs of a society. In constrast, government should maintain the law and order situation across the country so that companies could operate and make money, because these business corporations are the economical backbone of every country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42281879195 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05538463755 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442953020134 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0981175673 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.35 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169513871302 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551953498087 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539858902039 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882623461292 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335140973567 0.0667264976115 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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