Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The statement addressed two opposing strategies that could be adopted by politica leaders. Whereas, a political leader would either listen to the street sound of public people and seak a compromise between his/her strategies and the strategies suggested by the public, or a political leader could be sticked to hi/her own believe principles and never care for any suggestions noted by public people. This attitude of listen to public street sound and take it in to consideration, would lead to a proper decision making and would enhance such leader's popularity amoung these public people. While leaders who remainsticky to their own adopted strategies, giving their back to the public sound, are more likely less popular amoung his/her nation nations or even a dectators and might be blindered so far. it could be investigated through a set of evidences in order to maintain a proper evaluation of the both point of views.
For instance, critics who are not supporting the point of view of a leader who is listening to the public street sound, would find in such leader a proper representer of his/her nation, however, the the existance of debates and even disputes btween these critics opinion about a certain issue that is opposing to such leaders adopted onpinions. Then, there would be a level of understanding and tolerance in these debates. Consequently, a proper political life which is based on the freedom of expression and further adoptation of some public suggestions developed by the public individuals. Consequently, a successful leader would be experienced amoung his/her nation.
moreover, a leader who share his/her decision making process with a wider vast number of comunities are the more likly leader who make proper decision consequently. Whereas, his final decision would be taken based upon studying difference perspectives and compromising between different opinions, which is more likly reducing the risk of taking a wrong deciosion that would lead to a serious disaster for such nation. Consequently, the point of view that is stated about the effective leaders who yield to public sound if it is proven to be taken for guaranted is a succesful leader.
Conversely, the point of view that is stating that a successful effective leader is the leader who is not concerning any surrounding opinions and never listen to the street sound of his/her nation, is a leader who is continuously blamed hardly on his decision and losing popularity amoung a wide vast range of individuals in his/her nation who are concerned with the political issues of their nation. Then, it could engender high sounds that is calling for taking the responsibilities off such leader and stripping him/her from any authrorized positions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... decision making and would enhance such leaders popularity amoung these public people. ...
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Suggestion: It
...ectators and might be blindered so far. it could be investigated through a set of ...
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Suggestion:
...evaluation of the both point of views. For instance, critics who are not suppor...
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Suggestion: the
...representer of his/her nation, however, the the existance of debates and even disputes ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...representer of his/her nation, however, the the existance of debates and even disputes ...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'critics'' or 'critic's'?
Suggestion: critics'; critic's
... debates and even disputes btween these critics opinion about a certain issue that is o...
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Suggestion:
... be experienced amoung his/her nation. moreover, a leader who share his/her dec...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... experienced amoung his/her nation. moreover, a leader who share his/her decision ma...
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Suggestion:
...onsequently. Whereas, his final decision would be taken based upon studying diffe...
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...n for guaranted is a succesful leader. Conversely, the point of view that is st...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sful effective leader is the leader who is not concerning any surrounding opinions and never list...
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Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'blamed'.
Suggestion: hardly blamed
...nation, is a leader who is continuously blamed hardly on his decision and losing popularity a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...him/her from any authrorized positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2036199095 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88839163703 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1919053406 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.285714286 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222105102176 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927416028147 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612702724045 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155130138248 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028711478334 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.