Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Whether technology is a boon or a curse- is an age old topic of discussion. Some people believe in favor of it that it has eased our lives from myriad aspects ranging from conquering time and distance, and that it has transformed many of our tasks to conduct right from sitting at our own places. As shadows walk side by side with light, there are also some drawbacks that come up with technology. But, to some extent, its blessings have made our life easier than making it complicated.
Take, for example, the advancement of technology that allows us today to shop anything from any corner of the world instantly, that too without the hassle of cash transaction. While it is saving our time to commute to the market, it also offers us a more variety of products from different manufacturer than those available in a certain mall. In turn, it is creating new pattern of jobs that operate this type of platform- so the purpose it serves are certainly manifold. We can no way deny how it is easing our life from so many aspects.
Secondly, internet- that actually has transformed our lives to a whole new dimension. While exploring a new place- there are navigation maps directing us, while joining a team meeting or an interview from even another country- there is skype to connect us. Technology has literally brought us the world in our palm. The internet of things has integrated every aspect of our life to an easily accessible format- we have Uber and do not need to wait for a car to share our ride, we have different social media to get connected with our friends and society.
Albeit technology offers us a great comfort, it is sometimes accompanied by some sort of discomfort as well. In one sense, cards are making our transactions easier and less risk-free in terms of cash; the technology of hacking our personal information is also getting innovative with the passing of days. There are smarter frauds those are inventing tricks to penetrate the protection system. So, we must have to be aware of those also.
In essence, I agree with this statement as long as it is not taken to the extreme. In most perspective, yes- technology has really done miracles to redesign our lifestyle entirely. But due to its loopholes, it is by no means a foregone conclusion that technology is all about the good with little to no evil.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 432, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
.... So, we must have to be aware of those also. In essence, I agree with this state...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7104622871 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66270551342 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559610705596 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1699464536 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.894736842 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172474914585 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514974277692 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401393380014 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965481714527 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300835312165 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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