Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has developed so immensely in the past few years that each moment of our life is touched by technology. Albeit several inventions have made lives easier for us, technology has created more problems for the human race than it has provided solutions.
Our venture into technology has lead to excessive exploitation of the Earth. The invention of automobiles has in turn invented air pollution. We no longer enjoy the fresh air of nature but are drowned in toxic nanoparticles. The residents of Delhi, a city in India, are forced to wear masks daily during winters due to the excessive smog caused by air pollution from industries and vehicles that surrounds the city and many people have become victims of diseases like lung cancer, asthma and so on.
Moreover, the emission of green house gases from vehicles, factories, coal-based power houses, etc has lead to global warming. The effects of global warming are evident in the increased surface temperatures and the melting of ice caps. This melting has destroyed many polar habitats and forced thousand of species towards extinction. Also, many coastal cities are on the verge of destruction due to flooding. In addition to emitting toxic gases, the industries also dump their wastes into rivers and lakes. Thousands of aquatic species in the River Ganges flowing through India have become extinct due to the toxic industrial wastes and well as the hot water dispersed into the river by the factories.
Alongside, fresh water sources have also depleted leading to paucity of drinking water in Summer in many parts of India. Although there is no doubt that technology has made lives easier for us, it is at the cost of the nature. The automobiles have lead to air pollution, the large scale factories contribute to air and water pollution, the increased use of plastics has caused severe land pollution due to their bio degradable nature.
In summary, albeit technology had initially been thought of as a solution to many problems mankind has faced, it has caused more problems for humans to solve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in summary, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06140350877 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62409755259 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6122339202 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485433335094 0.243740707755 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0177136420823 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274095859756 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348636461724 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345666921998 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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