True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author claims that true success can be measured basically in terms of personal goals. I certainly concur to author's claim. The author believes that success is only success if it is based on personal goals. To support my position I would be providing some cogent points to support my points.
First and foremost What is success?, humans all over the world are struggling to achieve success. this struggle starts from the very time one is born. In the inchoate stages only we all struggle for success; from trying to get water or have food. success can be determined as if you are a better version of yourself then yesterday and if you are able live your life in the moment without any intrepidation your life is successful.
To achieve true success one must set goals for oneself and not make a bucket-list by comparing it with others.
Secondly, when we set goals for ourselves to improve ourself and not to impress others, we set goals which gives true self-satisfaction. you should not try to make a bucket list by copying it from any superstar or your best friend. All are meant to do some special unique tasks. A footballer in his childhood cannot set goals to be excellent in astronomy if say his best friend is to start a course on it. it is because if you deviate from your set goals and set a "plan B" you are giving spending world's strongest currency-time on that plan which not even yours which you yourself dont want. Just because someone is doing and achieving the success in it, it is not necessary that you will also achieve success in that field. hence, one should set his personal goals and not copy others to know the true essence of satisfaction.
Lastly, if you are dedicated to your goals you will not feel dejection towards that goal even you fail, if you are determined you will rise above all and try and try to achieve that goal and this is because you know your strength and weaknesses and hence, you know that the goals you set for yourself is achievable and you are capable of doing it.
There is a downside though to it, one might not know their potential or might under estimate oneself and try to set goals which they think are possible and might not push themselves and be satisfied with a version of themselves which is not at its full potential. we need to set goals which push ourselves which compels us to be better of ourselves than yesterday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'author'.
Suggestion: author
...f personal goals. I certainly concur to authors claim. The author believes that success...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...orld are struggling to achieve success. this struggle starts from the very time one ...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Success
... from trying to get water or have food. success can be determined as if you are a bette...
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Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...rday and if you are able live your life in the moment without any intrepidation your life is ...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... intrepidation your life is successful. To achieve true success one must set goa...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...als which gives true self-satisfaction. you should not try to make a bucket list by...
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Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...you deviate from your set goals and set a 'plan B' you are giving spend...
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Line 7, column 593, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...which not even yours which you yourself dont want. Just because someone is doing and...
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Line 7, column 737, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...ill also achieve success in that field. hence, one should set his personal goals and ...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... determined you will rise above all and try and try to achieve that goal and this is be...
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Line 11, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ves which is not at its full potential. we need to set goals which push ourselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58932714617 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49405600407 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457076566125 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4254074509 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.105263158 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428581368492 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116651540504 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884954455199 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219026358629 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738597225079 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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