The way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself.
Technology has revolutionized the way people communicate. Century ago people used pigeons or porters to send messages to their counterparts and had to wait for months before the message was received by the intended person. In the present day a message can be sent to a person across the world in a span of millisecond, through different platforms like phone call, email, fax, text message etc. The prompt suggests that the way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this suggestion and argue that the way in which message is delivered holds primal importance over the message itself for three reasons.
To begin with, a resume or an important closing statements for a major deal if sent over a simple text message rather than an email or a fax loses it's importance despite the content being flamboyant. For example, a person seeking a job if he or she sends their well structured resume over a whats-app message to HR of his dream company it sets a bad precedent that the person is not serious enough about the job despite their real intentions. Thus, it is necessary to send certain messages over the right platform intended for specific business purposes else it might demean or misinterpret the primary purpose of the message.
Furthermore, during an emergency situation a simple missed call to emergency number with any alert message is enough to indicate the seriousness of the situation. In other words, composing a detailed email or a lengthy explanation of the emergency situation is not feasible and inefficient. For example, when there is a fire in a building, just screaming out 'FIRE FIRE HELP' and the address of emergency is enough to notify the fire department for help. Instead if the person spends minutes in drafting the help request to fire department, the fire might have spread by then and the situation would spiral out of control. This shows that sometimes the way the message is delivered is more important than the content of the message.
However, messages like birthday wishes or congratulatory notes can be sent through any media of messaging and the content of the message holds more value compared to the communication platform. For instance, in a wedding, the save the dates could be sent over text or call or mail or any platform but the message should contain details of the venue and timings which is more important than the way message is delivered. Without the necessary content in the message body sending it on any platform does not hold water. Thus, in certain cases message content takes more importance over the media of communication.
In the right of above deliberation, it is seen that certain messages have more importance on the way of it's delivery compared to the content and certain other messages have more importance to the content over the way it's delivered. Thus, its dependent on the type of message and the situation and the authors claim that 'the way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself', cannot be generalized to all the messaging scenarios.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...second, through different platforms like phone call, email, fax, text message etc...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: FIRE
... fire in a building, just screaming out FIRE FIRE HELP and the address of emergency is en...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...to notify the fire department for help. Instead if the person spends minutes in draftin...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90132827324 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72497264455 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436432637571 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7656066092 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.947368421 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7368421053 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.568330617608 0.243740707755 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226890030402 0.0831039109588 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226076242065 0.0758088955206 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373060848645 0.150359130593 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197650184555 0.0667264976115 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.