We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
The issue states that most of precious life lesson are acquired from the struggles of an individual rather than successes they endure.
The issue correctly states that limits help us grow and nurture by enabling us to learn with use of refrained resources. it extrapolates
the fact that the most valuable lessons are always obtained from struggles which is not true.
The life lessons are majorly obtained when the fear of failure is always looming. Many great personality came from poor localities such
people had nothing to lose and therefore fear of not performing makes them work for it. Famous footballer Cristano Ronaldo came from poor
neighbourhood in lisbon, raised by his mother alone he had no financial support back in the days. he had work part time in order to support
his mother financially so that they were able to meet day to day expense. These rigourous conditions taught him morals. And the struggles
necessitated the need for being the best in order to succeed. And in the end his hard work paid off. he joined the biggest club in the world.
A similar situtation prevailed with few of the hollywood biggest star namely Robert Downing jr. was one. RD jr. spent 2 years of his life i n
jail for consumptions of narcotics. In the jail he learnt about the importance of life and after being realised from the jail . he started
pursuding his dream of becoming an actor.The struggles constanly haunted. he pursuded it relentlessly and became renowned actor across the globe. Similarly stars like wrestling
star Dwanye Johnson earlier in his career failed to even meet his basic necessities. he spent few years in insolvency and after persistant
efforts his wrestling career took off.
Though, This does not mean that the success does not teach valuable lessons. it helps an individual grow too. success reflect the struggle
one had in accomplising it. And what one must do to endure the successful period. During successful times one must learn the lessons of compassions
and help others grow. one learns the values of gratefulness and complancency. Bill gates currently donates majority of his time to
his charity organization he comes across various suffering people and helps them. also it is important to enjoy success as well as they
riped fruit of hard work one has done. success is certainly helpful in understand the true meaning of life.
In the conclusion it is true that struggles teach life long lessons which cannot be understood by someone one who has never undergone through
that period. struggle makes an individual achieve his full potential because the failure of not performing means losing at life. There
is no other options therefore a person would certainly perform at his maximum abilities. While it is also true that success teach a few
lessons as well which are certainly important in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05241090147 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61005042651 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530398322851 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7980958703 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7419354839 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3870967742 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29032258065 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167620508818 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417265656953 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565122245627 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567918645657 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659474551072 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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