You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Mr Shah,
I am currently accommodated at New Hall where I share the room 8B with one of my classmates. Although I am pleased with the room itself, I find that it is becoming impossible to live with my current room-mate anymore.
There are two reasons for this situation. Firstly, she enjoys listening to music at a very high volume, and this is something other surroundings student, and I find disturbing. The second problem is that she often throws big parties and invite a big group of people to our room late in the evening. I have requested he not to do this, but my requests have been ignored, and she continues to do it anyway.
Clearly, these two issues are making it almost impossible to focus on the study. At present, I am studying in the library which is not always convenient. Besides, the hostel rules strictly state that student must refrain from making too much noise and not have visitors late in the evenings.
Therefore, if not possible to move my room-mate out, I would like you to find another similar accommodation for me. I do not mind sharing it with other pupils, but prefer to have a single room.
I look forward to your reply
yours sincerely,
James Wills
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'surroundings'' or 'surrounding's'?
Suggestion: surroundings'; surrounding's
...igh volume, and this is something other surroundings student, and I find disturbing. The sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67605633803 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61166244168 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6366889739 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242015884148 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758546323177 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609677967005 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111435844106 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805846196258 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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