To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population country should make use of edible insects as foods However some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too What are the benefits and drawbacks of

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To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

With the world population is predicted to reach 9 billion people in 2050, producing adequate livestock represents a serious challenge in the future. The insect-based products may solve this issue as they do less harm to the environment. On the other side, insect-based food is less hygiene and causes a negative effect on the environment. This essay will present the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

On the positive side, insects can be consumed instantly by people and also extracted to obtain protein from them. The edible insect is readily consumable and contains high-quality protein. In order to extract the insect’s protein, the insect must be decomposed first to absorb the amino acids. A recent example of the development of insect farming can be found in Mexico. They claimed protein from insects is considered 6 times higher than the livestock. Moreover, the insect emits fewer greenhouse gases than those from conventional livestock. Therefore, insects are a potential source for conventional production for protein either direct or indirect human consumption.

On the negative side, the food safety problem may arise for the mass production of insect farms. Contamination with pathogens will require advanced hygienic farming. Also, proper labelling may require for those who have seafood allergic. In addition, even if the food is environmentally safe and nutritious, the emotional and psychological aspects need to be addressed. For instance, Western consumers are hard to convince to eat insects is also can be a huge setback. Lastly, the government legislation for further development has been lagged behind.

In conclusion, the insect-based product provides an engaging future development as a new and sustainable food source. The amount and the quality of protein content from insects are beneficial, despite its human emotion and government regulation still be a drawback for the mass production.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: eating
... Western consumers are hard to convince to eat insects is also can be a huge setback. ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51342281879 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0434021659 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4749949274 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4736842105 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232779439804 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757165784166 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045884852522 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143408011443 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161045522091 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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