Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Moving out of hometowns is a very common decision among young adults. This decision is mainly because of the lack of opportunities in the field of what they want to perceive in their life. I believe, young people should move out of their home town, irrespective of, their feelings towards their hometown.
Reasons for young people to move out of their hometowns are, carrier opportunities are innumerable based on their qualifications and one suitable example for this is, people from all over the world want to relocate to developed nations. Such as the United States of America, the United Kingdom because of the fact that these countries have immense work opportunities with high pay-scale compared to carrier opportunities available in their hometown. One more thing to consider here, to get quality education from the top universities. Some people want to explore new things in life and they want to find 'the real' themselves. For this reason, they decide to change their hometown.
Reasons for young people to live in their hometowns throughout their lives are, few people built their life, made friends in their hometowns and they can't even imagine leaving everything behind and move out of their hometown. Parents decided not the leave their hometown to move in with their children and for this reason, many adults refuse to move out of their hometown. Few people are scared and think negatively about moving out. They are confident that they make their living in their hometown itself and they are sentimental and don't want to leave the place where they grew up.
People should be practical in their thought process and should choose wisely. In this case, moving out from their hometown makes sense than sticking it to their hometown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...d States of America, the United Kingdom because of the fact that these countries have immense work oppor...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ade friends in their hometowns and they cant even imagine leaving everything behind ...
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Line 9, column 536, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...own itself and they are sentimental and dont want to leave the place where they grew...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06206896552 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49965514863 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6339172085 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534532614207 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227527691074 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142805572478 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386866505107 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977188889077 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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